And Then There Were None

From my first draft and my last And Then There Were None Essay, I changed some spelling and added punctuation. I also took away and added sentences. What helped me the most on my And Then There Were None Essay was sharing the essay with and adult. I shared my essay with my mom and she helped me realize that I had some sentences that I didn't need. She also gave me some really good feed back that really helped improve my essay. I think what will improve my writing this year is having my peers critique my writing so I know what's wrong and I will be able to fix it, then in the future I will be able to look back and see what was said and look for that on my new papers. I think I have room to grow with my spelling and using the write punctuation. My goal this year is to write a paper that has less than 5 errors on my first draft.